MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The graph below
represent
statistics about certain Change the verb form
represents
countries
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countries'
country's
residence
pf overseas in Australia.
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residences
Overall
,it is evident that Indonesia
has the biggest numbers, while
Hong kong
and Malaysia have the smallest ones.
To commence with Capitalize word
Kong
Indonesia
had gradual
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a gradual
rose
in the Replace the word
rise
started
point, which made up around 2, Replace the word
starting
while
Hong kong
hadCapitalize word
Kong
significant
grown , which accounted for 7, respectively.Change the adjective
significantly
Then
there Correct subject-verb agreement
was
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
considarable
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considerable
considerably
rose
for Replace the word
rise
Indonesia
, which comprised 10, while
Hong Kong had fluctuation until the end of Correct article usage
the statistic
Correct article usage
the statistic
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statistics
statistic
.
When it comes to Malaysia, there was Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
stable
trend, which accounted for 10 at the start and Add an article
a stable
the stable
then
had a fluctuation which made up approximately 17, respectively.According to
the graph, Singapore had considarable
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considerable
considerably
grown
, which accounted for 10 at the starting point, Replace the word
growth
then
there was decline
trend, which comprised around 20, respectively.
It may be concluded from the graph that international students from countries Correct article usage
a decline
such
as Indonesia
and singapore
showed Change the capitalization
Singapore
biggest
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the biggest
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
residence
Replace the word
residents
pf
overseas in Australia.Correct your spelling
of
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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