schoole should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films tv and computer instead. to what extent do you agree with this.

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task achievement

Ensure your essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Your introduction should clearly state your main argument, the body should provide supporting points, and the conclusion should summarize your views neatly.

task achievement

In the body of your essay, support your points with specific examples. This shows the examiner that you can think critically and apply your argument to real-world scenarios.

coherence cohesion

Your essay should have a logical flow. Each paragraph should have a clear main idea and the sentences within it should be logically connected to each other and to the main idea of the paragraph.

coherence cohesion

Check your spelling and grammar before submitting your essay. Avoid using colloquial expressions and make sure to use academic vocabulary appropriately.

task achievement

Work on expanding your arguments with more depth and detail. This includes providing a balanced view, considering both sides of the argument, even if you lean towards one side.

coherence cohesion

To improve coherence, use linking words to connect ideas and paragraphs cohesively.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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schoole should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, and use films tv and computer instead. to what extent do you agree with this.

Include an introduction and conclusion

The line below shows how many students of a school in the UK chose to take part in four different sports between 2001 and 2011.

Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages oufweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balance. What problems does this cause? Can you suggest some solutions to this issue?

Some people say that in all levels of education, frm primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.