The diagram below show the process for recycling plastic battles.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of the
recycling Correct article usage
apply
plastic
bottles.This
process
has 9 stages,starting from collection to the production of a new product.
As seen from the diagram,the consumers need to sort out type of the materials before throwing into
the rubbish bin.Next,the recycle truck will collect the Correct pronoun usage
them into
plastic
bottles and send to
Correct pronoun usage
them to
recycle
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the recycle
centra
to be sorted out by the workers.Correct your spelling
centre
Following
this
,compress
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a compress
process
will take place.The plastics will be compressed into the big blocks.After
this
,The blocks are being
crushed into Unnecessary verb
apply
the
pieces before being washed .Correct article usage
apply
The next step is
that pieces of plastics
will have to Fix the agreement mistake
plastic
put
in the machine to produce Add a missing verb
be put
plastic
pellets then
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and then
direct
Replace the word
directly
procced
to Correct your spelling
proceed
heating
Add an article
the heating
process
.The raw materials are being
produced Unnecessary verb
apply
as a result
of heating then
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and then
be send
to the factories to produce new products.
Wrong verb form
sent
Overall
,recycling of plastic
bottles need
both human and machine to work.Change the verb form
needs
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