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the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university

the map below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particularly university
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The following diagrams provide information about the proposed changes that are planned to take place at the Biology School of ABC University. The total area of the school will remain the same, with the central library and indoor sports hall being unaffected by the proposed changes.
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, new facilities will be added to the area.
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 with, the driving road will remain as it is, but a new staff car park will be built beside the teaching building where the current bushes are located. The teaching building itself will be expanded by being split into two towers, similar to the lecture room.
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, the drama
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 will be transformed into a music
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 for a different purpose.
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 to the expansion of the IT
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, a laboratory and an office building will be constructed outside the indoor sports hall by removing a large portion of the bushes. It is important to note that the central library, cafe, and indoor sports hall will remain unchanged in the future.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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