A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work.You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.In your letter.    explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum    describe  some skills and qualities you have that would be useful    give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir   The reason why I am writing to you is that I want to apply for admission to the voluntary
work
in your hotel beginning the job.I want to inform my skills which
my
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agility time to
job
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,
such
as I have
a good acts
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a good act
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for humans,
as well as
its to make improve
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.    I have been studying for 5 years.I
am challenge
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this
situation.I am indolent at home nowadays.
Although
my parents are wealthy.But my soul against my heart.For
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I want to
work
unpaid
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job.When I help around people,
the
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raise my mood.
That is
why I desire unpaid
work
.Most
humans
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afraid to
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bashful.They don't earn the money.    I believe I am the best choice for
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position as
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have a lot of experience in previous
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.My excellence improve your museum.I have got unusual abilities.
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as
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will be achievable.Your
museum
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lovely and tidy all time.
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improve
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your quality and you will make money to live on.I do whatever
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what do you want.
Then
I know related how to guard at night. I give
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more details
when
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I would
readily
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available for
work
, what you're after give me
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.I am captivated fastest begin of the
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. I look forward to hearing from you Yours sincerely, Ali
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coherence cohesion
Ensure clarity and logical flow between paragraphs, addressing one idea per paragraph to improve readability and organization.
coherence cohesion
Utilize an appropriate greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Name/Title],') and closing ('Yours faithfully/sincerely,') in formal letters for professionalism.
task achievement
Focus directly on the task requirements, providing clear explanations and relevant examples for each point made. Address all parts of the question for a complete response.
task achievement
Adopt a formal tone suitable for a letter to a director; avoid informal language and ensure professionalism in your writing.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enthusiastic
  • Volunteer
  • Part-time
  • Unpaid work
  • Museum director
  • Skills and qualities
  • Customer service
  • Organization
  • Team player
  • Flexible
  • Reliable
  • Positive attitude
  • Availability
  • Professional goals
  • Community contribution
  • References
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