A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work.You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.In your letter. explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir
The reason why I am writing to you is that I want to apply for admission to the voluntary
work
in your hotel beginning the job.I want to inform my skills which my
agility time to Add a missing verb
are my
job
,Add an article
the job
a job
such
as I have a good acts
for humans,Correct the article-noun agreement
a good act
good acts
as well as
its to make improve situation
.
I have been studying for 5 years.I Add an article
the situation
am challenge
Change the verb form
am challenging
am challenged
this
situation.I am indolent at home nowadays.Although
my parents are wealthy.But my soul against my heart.For this
I want to Add a comma
this,
work
unpaid
job.When I help around people,Correct article usage
an unpaid
the
raise my mood.Correct your spelling
they
That is
why I desire unpaid work
.Most humans
afraid to Add a verb
humans are
humans were
being
bashful.They don't earn the money.
I believe I am the best choice for Change the form of the verb
be
this
position as a
have a lot of experience in previous Correct pronoun usage
I
role
.My excellence improve your museum.I have got unusual abilities.Fix the agreement mistake
roles
Such
as its
will be achievable.Your Correct pronoun usage
it
museum
lovely and tidy all time.Add a verb
museum is
museum was
Its
Correct pronoun usage
It
improve
your quality and you will make money to live on.I do whatever Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
labor
what do you want.Change the spelling
labour
Then
I know related how to guard at night.
I give a
more details Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
when
I would Change preposition
about when
readily
available for Add a missing verb
be readily
work
, what you're after give me work
.I am captivated fastest begin of the work
.
I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure clarity and logical flow between paragraphs, addressing one idea per paragraph to improve readability and organization.
coherence cohesion
Utilize an appropriate greeting (e.g., 'Dear [Name/Title],') and closing ('Yours faithfully/sincerely,') in formal letters for professionalism.
task achievement
Focus directly on the task requirements, providing clear explanations and relevant examples for each point made. Address all parts of the question for a complete response.
task achievement
Adopt a formal tone suitable for a letter to a director; avoid informal language and ensure professionalism in your writing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
