The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the cutting tools development during
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the stone
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Stone Age
Overall
, the diagram suggests that cutting tools became more sophisticated and efficient over time during the Stone Age. This
is likely due to
a number of factors, such
as improvements in tool
-making techniques and the development of new materials.
In the first tool
which is labeled as being from 1.4 million years ago. It appears to be a biface, which is a type of stone tool
that is
flaked on both sides to create a sharp edge. The tool
in the diagram is relatively small and round, with a pointed tip. It is also
quite rough in appearance, suggesting that it was not made with a great deal of care or precision.
On the other hand
, the second tool
is labeled
as being from 800,000 years ago. It is Change the spelling
labelled
also
a biface, but it is much larger and more symmetrical than Tool
A. The edges of the tool
are also
much sharper, and it appears to have been made with more care and skill.Submitted by meilyfransiska on
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