The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the way a hydroelectric power station can produce
electricity
.
Overall
, there are two process cycle
distributed in Fix the agreement mistake
cycles
a
Correct article usage
the
day
and night
stages
. The water
flows
downward in the day
, while
the
Change preposition
in the
night
stage is
the Unnecessary verb
apply
water
flows
back.
In the beginning stages
of the day
, the water
from a river detain
in the high-level reservoir. Afterwards, the dam can be Wrong verb form
is detained
open
and the Wrong verb form
opened
water
flows
to generate electricity
. Then
, the electricity
stored
by Add a missing verb
is stored
generator
. Next stage, the power station distributed Add an article
the generator
a generator
electricity
to the national grid by power lines. In the last
, the water
stored
by the Add a missing verb
is stored
low level
reservoir.
Add a hyphen
low-level
On the other hand
, the water
in the night
stages
flows
back to start to the first position on the day
stages
. Moreover
, the turbine pumped back the water
to a high level
reservoir Add a hyphen
high-level
while
closed during night
. The Add an article
the night
water
is stored in the up level and flows
down again.Submitted by azizahqonitas on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, day, night, stages, water, flows with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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