The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

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Remarkable information is provided regarding the rate of nutrients in two meals by the given pie charts. From an

overall

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view, it can be seen that

carbohydrat

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carbohydrate

carbohydrates

was the main ingredient in both dinners. What’s more, the volume of protein in

medium

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baked

potato

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is almost twice as

macaroni

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. By a closer examination, it is obvious that carbohydrates in

macaroni

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and

medium

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baked

potato

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are just over ½ and 1/3, respectively.

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medium

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baked

potato

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’s protein is one-fourth which is 14% higher than

macaroni

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. In

medium

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baked

potato

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, the rate of glucose is equal to its other nutrients at just more than one-sixth.

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, in

macaroni

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, the highest third constitutive is saturated fat which is 21%. Turning to ingredients with the lowest proportion, saturated fat is one out of ten in a

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medium baked

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medium-baked

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potato

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Moreover

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, in

macaroni

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, other nutrients are approximately as half much as

glocose

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glucose

by 5%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, macaroni with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

149 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutritional consistency
carbohydrates
proteins
fats
vitamins
minerals
fiber
proportion
component
pie graph
comparison
significant
balance
healthy
dietary choices
implications
absent
presence
macro-nutrients
micro-nutrients

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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

You just moved to a new home and planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb the neighbour. Write a letter to your naeighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come.

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. do you agree or disagree?

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as the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing more and more jobs. Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and disciss at least one problem that may result

In many countries, people can eat a wide variety of food from other countries. As a result, they eat more food from other cultures rather than cuisine. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?