The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
Remarkable information is provided regarding the rate of nutrients in two meals by the given pie charts. From an
overall
view, it can be seen that
carbohydrat
Correct your spelling
carbohydrate
carbohydrates
was the main ingredient in both dinners. What’s more, the volume of protein in
medium
baked
potato
is almost twice as
macaroni
. By a closer examination, it is obvious that carbohydrates in
macaroni
and
medium
baked
potato
are just over ½ and 1/3, respectively.
Moreover
,
medium
baked
potato
’s protein is one-fourth which is 14% higher than
macaroni
. In
medium
baked
potato
, the rate of glucose is equal to its other nutrients at just more than one-sixth.
However
, in
macaroni
, the highest third constitutive is saturated fat which is 21%. Turning to ingredients with the lowest proportion, saturated fat is one out of ten in a
medium baked
Add a hyphen
medium-baked
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potato
.
Moreover
, in
macaroni
, other nutrients are approximately as half much as
glocose
Correct your spelling
glucose
by 5%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, potato, macaroni with synonyms.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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