Write a letter to a friend about an item you borrowed last week, that accidentally got damaged. In your letter – Describe the item. – What was the damage? – What do you intend to do to rectify the problem?

Dear Jay, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to share

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bad news with you. As you remember

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last

week,

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borrowed your

airpods

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for

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days because of

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great functionality and better performance. Unfortunately,

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had an accident and one of the

pod

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got

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broke into two. Let me explain the situation. When

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first saw

this

gadget with you

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was amazed

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with it

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borrowed it from you but yesterday night when

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was riding my Activa,

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in-between because of the speed breaker my vehicle got slipped. Luckily,

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am Okay with

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cuts on my hand, but your

airpods

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AirPods

got smashed between the activa and land. As it

was having

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having

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cover, the whole body is in good condition and one got

broke

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down into two. I was not happy with

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incident. It would be great if you

can

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let me know the actual

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of the Pods

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so that

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can repay you. If you want,

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can fix it by taking it to the shop.

Nevertheless

, it was a great device it would be hard to find someone who can fix

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,

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am ready to pay the prize. Thanks for your consideration. Yours Faithfully Jay Chawla