some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that with the development of
e-
books
, it is not far away when
paper
books
will disappear
while
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some disagree as for them it is an impossible thing to believe. Despite the mass use of
e-
books
, I still think that traditional
paper
books
are not going anywhere. In
the
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light of the current growth of
new
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technological era,
e-
books
have become popular in a very short
time
. Especially, youngsters who spend maximum
time
on gadgets, make use of
this
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one-click away
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books
for their personal or educational purposes, saving
time
and money.
For instance
, a survey showed that over
years
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more students spend less
time
in
library
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as every
book
is now in their hands
in
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one device.
Thus
, the libraries have installed computers as per the demand increased so
people
can
convinently
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conveniently
look for their desired information in minimum
time
.
However
, printed
books
are still high in demand in the market.
People
prefer to carry a real
book
or a handout with them as
internet
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is not always available.
Instead
of
books business
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shutting down
due to
e-
books
,
for example
, new ventures are being set where
an
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old
cafe style
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libraries are opening in different locations.
People
are fond of
books
, the smell of
a
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paper
,
the
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tangibility
books
bring
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impossible to attain from any screen. Another advantage is that elderly
people
who are not
tech efficient
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are only comfortable reading from a printed
book
. It
also
brings in a sense of calm when finishing a
book
and flipping the
last
page over which is obviously missed in any ebook. In conclusion, some
people
consider ebooks presence as
a
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harm to old printed
books
yet in my opinion,
although
it is true that ebooks are a quick source of information,
still
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its
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advantages can not
out run
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the importance of
paper
books
.
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task achievement
Your essay effectively addresses the prompt, touching on both sides and providing a clear opinion. To improve, ensure you further explore each point with deeper analysis and a broader range of examples.
coherence & cohesion
You've structured your essay well with a good balance of introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Increase clarity by signposting your arguments more explicitly, guiding the reader through your essay with phrases like 'on one hand', 'on the other hand', etc.
task achievement
To bolster your main points, aim for a variety of detailed examples and data where possible. This could involve citing more specific studies, surveys, or tangible outcomes of e-books versus paper books to support your arguments more convincibly.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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