The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map displays two
locations
options for a company Change the noun form
location
who
plans to develop a new Correct pronoun usage
that
restaurant
in the centre of Paris.
It can clearly be seen that the company may choose either the first location
which is located in the right bank or the second location
which is situated in the left bank. Both are located near main public attractions.
Regarding the first location
, the restaurant
is planned to be located in the western part of the city, across Bir-Hakeim Bridge and next to a park. There are limited tourist attractions near the restaurant
, only the Maritime Museum which attracts around 8000 visitors
per day
and the Aquarium with 2000 visitors
per day
In terms of the second location
, it is planned to lie in the southern part of the city. The second option is more strategic than the first option as it is a more crowded area. Located between the Eiffel Tower and Art
Gallery, each with 16000 and 750 Correct article usage
the Art
visitors
per day
, the company may attract large
pool of customers. Add an article
a large
Furthermore
, in
the same road as the Change preposition
on
restaurant
, there is a sports centre with 500 visitors
per day
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