The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the dramatic developments that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton over 13 years.
In 2000, there was a large number of residential areas and houses compared to 2013. That means
,
a supermarket and other apartments were built by the local people along the Remove the comma
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river side
in 2013. Correct your spelling
riverside
Moreover
, riding ferry
in the sea became popular among the community Correct article usage
a ferry
whereas
there was no water sports service in 2000. In 2013, the railway station was noticeably built up along the blue sea and that was one of the remarkable changes in the resort.
In the north corner, there was a great number of households were
sprung up along the railway. Unnecessary verb
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Furthermore
, woodland was cleared to build a factory to get revenue for the residents. One of the significant developments was having an airport in 2013 compared to previous
thirteen years.
Correct article usage
the previous
Overall
, comprising
the two maps Verb problem
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shows
that the environment has changed from being rural to Correct subject-verb agreement
show
urban
area.Correct article usage
an urban
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