The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graphs display the percentages of people
in
different genders and Change preposition
of
age
brackets who purchased various music
albums in Britain. From an overall
perspective, both pop and rock music
was
most common in the 25–34 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
age
bracket, while
the classic's
Change the noun form
classics
classic
was
popular in the oldest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
age
band. It is also
noteworthy that males were more interested in them than females.
To begin
with, the proportion among those aged 16–34 buying pop and rock music
albums hovered around 30%, by far the greatest of any other. This
number declined significantly with decreasing age
, reaching its lowest point in the highest age
group. However
, this
was also
the only group in which they overtook others in purchasing classical music
by approximately 20%.
In addition
, the allocation of men consuming these products was higher than women's, with those in pop music
and rock's
less than 30%, Change noun form
rock
while
the latter accounted for roughly 20%. This
rate was even closer between both bands in classical music
, which varied between 7-9%.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, music with synonyms.
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