The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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the graph
depict
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depicts
the
information about the Correct article usage
apply
mobile's
which were sold by Change noun form
mobiles
top
five favourite brands of cellphones, over Correct article usage
the top
an five
Correct your spelling
a five-year
years
of period, from 2009 to 2013
After the analysis, it is clearly stated that in the year of
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apply
2009
Add a comma
2009,
nokia
had the highest selling units almost 400 Change the capitalization
Nokia
millions
and after having a small dip, Change to singular
million
this
figure rock bottom to 250 million
in revenue in 2013. moreover
, samsung
saw an increasing Change the capitalization
Samsung
trend
close
to 250 Change preposition
of close
million
and this
trend
went upto
four Correct your spelling
up to
years
straight reaching to
400 Change preposition
apply
million
profit from seeling
Correct your spelling
selling
smarphone
. Correct your spelling
smartphone
however
, ZTE did not show much of profit
Correct article usage
a profit
trend
and remained steadily
Change the word
steady
Correct your spelling
throughout
thoughout
the five Correct your spelling
throughout
years
furthermore
, a small riverly
between Correct your spelling
river
rivalry
apple
and LG Capitalize word
Apple
were
seen there. at the start of the year, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
apple
did not show much of Add an article
the apple
trend
but the figure saw Correct article usage
a trend
upward
Correct article usage
an upward
trend
(100 million
) after two years
and this
figure skyrocketed to almost 150million
in total. Correct your spelling
150 million
on the other hand
, close to hundred
Correct article usage
a hundred
million
in
units were sold by LG but in 2011, the downward Change preposition
apply
trend
had
started and the same Unnecessary verb
apply
very
Correct word choice
apply
trend
happened after another two years
overall
, it is clearly manifested that Change the capitalization
Nokia
nokia
and Change the capitalization
Nokia
Change the capitalization
Samsung
samsung
Change the capitalization
Samsung
were
had the Unnecessary verb
apply
million
of users Correct your spelling
millions
at
each Change preposition
apply
years
but for Change to a singular noun
year
apple
and LG a fluctuation Capitalize word
Apple
had been
seen throughout the periodWrong verb form
was
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