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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting ans reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffe and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting ans reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the percentage of
residents
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 who bought and drank
coffee
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 and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart for the
last
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 4 weeks.
Overall
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, most people living in those cities went to a cafe for
coffee
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 or tea for the previous month. Some
residents
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 prefer buying
instant
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coffee
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 rather than fresh
coffee
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 over the past month. The proportion of people going to cafes to enjoy caffeine drinking
such
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 as
coffee
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 or tea is way higher than those buying
instant
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coffee
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.
This
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 situation is pretty much the same for all cities in Australia, except for Adelaide which shows a similar ratio of
residents
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 going to cafes and purchasing
instant
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coffee
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. More than 60% of the population living in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart going to cafes for the previous 4 weeks. Most people in those five cities purchase and drink more
instant
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coffee
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 than freshly brewed
coffee
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.
However
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, around 45 per cent of Sydney's
residents
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 purchase either
instant
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 or regular
coffee
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.
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