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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line chart provides information on the export of
wheat
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 in
Australia
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, Canada and the European community.
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, it can be seen that the amount of
wheat
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 which was exported in Canada and the European community increased with some fluctuations but the export in
Australia
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 decreased over time. Looking at the data sets that increased in more detail, it is evident that
wheat
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 exports in the European community stood at approximately 17
million
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tons
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 in 1985. By 1990, it had risen to 21
million
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tons
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.
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, the experts of
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 in Canada
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accelerated from 19
million
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tons
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 to 25
million
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tons
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 from 1985 to 1988, which was the highest export on the chart,
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 it dropped to 19
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tons
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 in 1990, which was
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similar to 1985. Turning to the remaining data sets that decreased, it can be seen that, the amount of
wheat
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 which was exported in
Australia
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 was 15
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tons
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 in 1985.
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 figure briefly rose to 16
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tons
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, dropped to 11
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tons
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 in 1989, and
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 remained almost constant. In 1990
wheat
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 exports in
Australia
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 were the lowest on the chart.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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