A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advise about how to apply
Dear Ali,
Hello, hope you are in good health. I received your email that you are planning to apply University of Business
management college’s
course which I finished Correct your spelling
Management College’s
last
year in Germany. I am writing this
letter to share some advice that might to
help you.
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apply
Firstly
, let me explain the course in more detail. I will tell you what I know. The course is Correct article usage
a totally
totally
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total
40
hours. The teacher has Change preposition
of 40
a perfect knowledge
, so he can easily teach you every secret of Remove the article
perfect knowledge
a piece of perfect knowledge
management
. Also
, the classes here are more challenging than at other universities, so it's a great opportunity to learn more.
By the way, I really recommend this
. The University of Business management
is one of the most renowned Capitalize word
Management
management
schools in the world. Moreover
, the location of this
faculty is awesome and it is nearby
great cafes and bookstores.
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near
Finally
, apply online from the college’s website. When you apply, do not forget to add some achievements such
as IELTS or SAT certificates.
Let me know if you need anything else.
Yours sincerely,
SamandarSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
To enhance the logical structure, aim to provide a more seamless transition between paragraphs. This can be done by using connecting words or phrases that link the ideas smoothly between sections. A more explicit connection between your recommendation of the university and its competitive nature could strengthen your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
Include a brief closing paragraph to summarize the main points of your letter or to reiterate your offer of further assistance. This can help to neatly wrap up your letter and reinforce your suggestions.
Task Achievement
Expand on your advice regarding the application process with more specific steps or tips, such as how to prepare for the IELTS or SAT certificates, or any particular aspects of the application to focus on. Such details would make your advice more actionable and valuable.