The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
pie chart Verb problem
apply
illustrate
information about the population Change the verb form
illustrates
in
different ages in two countries starting from 2000 and ending with the prediction for 2050. Change preposition
of
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the highest age percentage
in most of the years
in both countries was from 15-59 years
.
According to
what is shown, the largest proportion
in
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of
Yemen
population in 2000 was Change noun form
Yemen's
people
from 0-14 years
with 50.1%. However
, in Italy it is the opposite, the percentage
of people
who are from 15-59 is the highest of
61.6%, and the lowest rate was for Change preposition
at
peopel
who are under that age.
Looking closely Correct your spelling
people
to
the figures, the Change preposition
at
proportion
in Yemen changed a lot after 50 years
. Firstly
, the percentage
of people
from 0-14 and from 15-59 years
was approximately the same, but in 2050 the percentage
of people
who are from 15-59 years
increased to 57.3%. Although
, Correct word choice
However
people
who are Change preposition
for people
from
60+ Change preposition
apply
years
the proportion
of it did no
Correct your spelling
not
changed
dramatically, there is just around 2% change. Wrong verb form
change
While in
Italy the rate of Correct word choice
In
people
who are 60+ years
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old become
become
the second highest Wrong verb form
became
percentage
and rise
substantially after 5 decades with 42.3%. Wrong verb form
rose
Moreover
, the proportion
of people
who are under 15 is roughly the same, but people
who are from 15 and under Correct article usage
the people
than
60 Change preposition
apply
years
decreased to 46.2%Submitted by aminaalmatrook on
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