The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart
illustrate
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information about the population
in
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of
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different ages in two countries starting from 2000 and ending with the prediction for 2050.
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, it can clearly be seen that the highest age
percentage
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in most of the
years
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in both countries was from 15-59
years
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.
According to
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what is shown, the largest
proportion
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in
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Yemen
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population in 2000 was
people
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from 0-14
years
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with 50.1%.
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, in Italy it is the opposite, the
percentage
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of
people
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who are from 15-59 is the highest
of
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61.6%, and the lowest rate was for
peopel
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people
who are under that age. Looking closely
to
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the figures, the
proportion
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in Yemen changed a lot after 50
years
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.
Firstly
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, the
percentage
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of
people
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from 0-14 and from 15-59
years
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was approximately the same, but in 2050 the
percentage
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of
people
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who are from 15-59
years
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increased to 57.3%.
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Although
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,
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people
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for people
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who are
from
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apply
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60+
years
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the
proportion
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of it did
no
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not
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changed
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dramatically, there is just around 2% change.
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While in
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Italy the rate of
people
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who are 60+
years
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old become
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become
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the second highest
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and
rise
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rose
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substantially after 5 decades with 42.3%.
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, the
proportion
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of
people
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who are under 15 is roughly the same, but
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people
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the people
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who are from 15 and under
than
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apply
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60
years
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decreased to 46.2%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, years, proportion, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • population demographics
  • projected
  • projections
  • notable changes
  • demographic changes
  • implications
  • birth rates
  • life expectancy
  • senior citizens
  • young population
  • working-age population
  • dependency ratio
  • aging population
  • socio-economic impact
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