The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The pie chart shows us the different sections of costs and the income sources of the American charity organization .
An
Correct article usage
The
overall
amount
of money
the charity gained is $53,561,589. And, the expenditure amount
is $336693 lesser
compared to the Correct word choice
less
revenue
amount
. There are revenue
sources including six sections while
expenditures consist of three sections.
According to
the pie chart, in the revenue
section, the donated food, 86.6
% and the least earning source was Government grants and Investment income the percentage of both is 0.2%. And, community contributions contributed 10.4% of Add a missing verb
was 86.6
money
as an income
A large Add an article
the money
amount
of money
was spent on different program services which is 95.8%. 2.6% of money
spent
Add a missing verb
is spent
for
raising funds Change preposition
on
while
management and general accounts
for 1.6%. It should be noted that Fix the agreement mistake
account
charity
was able to cover the expenditures with the Correct article usage
the charity
revenue
amount
they have got
.Wrong verb form
had
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