The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

The pie chart shows us the different sections of costs and the income sources of the American charity organization .

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overall

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amount

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of

money

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the charity gained is $53,561,589. And, the expenditure

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is $336693

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less

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compared to the

revenue

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amount

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. There are

revenue

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sources including six sections

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expenditures consist of three sections.  

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the pie chart, in the

revenue

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section, the donated food,

86.6

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was 86.6

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% and the least earning source was Government grants and Investment income the percentage of both is 0.2%. And, community contributions contributed 10.4% of

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money

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the money

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as an income A large

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of

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was spent on different program services which is 95.8%. 2.6% of

money

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spent

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is spent

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for

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on

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raising funds

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management and general

accounts

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account

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for 1.6%. It should be noted that

charity

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the charity

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was able to cover the expenditures with the

revenue

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amount

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they

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had

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.