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The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the causes of this situation? What are the solutions?

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The world's natural resources are consumed at a rapid pace. There are many reasons for
this
,
such
 as
deforestation
 and pollution. In
this
 essay, we will look at the causes and solutions to these points.
Deforestation
 is the act of destroying entire habitats for
monitary
Correct your spelling
monetary
 value.
This
monitary
Correct your spelling
monetary
 value can be land, business, or goods, but it happens for one reason. Human greed. The side effects of human greed can be found in South America, where innocent animals are losing their homes. A number of animals have become endangered because of
deforestation
, like the South American
oragutan
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orangutan
. Another problem caused by
deforestation
 can be felt every time you breathe, as trees are our planet's oxygen producers.Their importance can not be understated, as over 50 % of the oxygen we breathe is from trees. Pollution has many variations in air, water, and nature. All of these variations are caused by humans
such
 as our overuse of plastic, which is dumped into the ocean and land. The fossil fuels we burn go up in the air, polluting it to the point where, in some cities, it is a luxury to have fresh air. All of
this
 pollution has a lasting
affect
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effect
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 on the earth, from less fertile soil to coral reefs dying every time we blink. Solutions to these problems may seem obvious, but sometimes the hardest things are the simplest.These solutions have all already been presented, and we can easily get rid of the petrol and fossil fuel industries with electric cars and solar panels.
Deforestation
 can be simply balanced by planting a tree, no matter how many are cut down. The reason none of
this
 is happening is because of us or people who have fallen into
this
 endless cycle of captivity. Under these
money hungry
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money-hungry
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 companies, they are waiting to catch you in the consumerist trap.All to distract you from the big issues. If
this
 continues, there will be no difference between the orangutans and us both
extict
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extinct
.
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your essay has a clear structure with distinct introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea, supported by examples or evidence.
Task Response
Develop your paragraphs well by expanding on each cause and solution with more detailed explanations and specific examples. This deepens the analysis and helps the reader understand your points more clearly.
General
Be mindful of spelling and grammar to maintain professionalism and clarity. Words like 'monitary' should be corrected to 'monetary', and 'oragutan' to 'orangutan'. Consistent errors can distract from the message of your essay.
General
Try to use a variety of sentence structures to make your writing more engaging and to demonstrate your language skills. This variety also helps in making your essay more readable and interesting to the examiner.
Task Response
Balance the focus between causes and solutions. Ensure that you give equal attention to explaining not only why a problem exists but also how it can be solved, including practical steps and the broader impact of these solutions.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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