The diagram below shows a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
This
is a rudimentary picture of a museum
at 2 points in time.Overall
there have been lots of changes both in the exterior and interior of the museum
. One of the things that is
noticeable is the way that the road leading to the museum
has been replaced by a car park.
We can see in the picture that a huge amount of forest life has been cut down. Also
, the type of tree to the west of the Museum
has completely changed. The two trees on the northwest side of the museum
have stayed the same and have not changed.
As another point, The interior of the building has undergone a big shakeup. The store room is now the main point of entry. The only room that has been kept is the shop. The building has gained 3 additional rooms and from the looks of it completely removed the door that would currently open in either reception or cafe.Submitted by mohamad.sanaye462 on
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