The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.

The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
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The pie charts illustrate various fields of degrees at the National University in three decades starting from 1990 to 2010. The four majors given in the charts are
Computer
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science, Medicine,
Business
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, and Law.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that people granted a
computer
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science degree increased throughout a given period,
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, the
business
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ones decreased over time.
While
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the other two fields showed little change.
Computer
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science and
business
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graduates consisted of around 60% which covered two-thirds of the four major alumni. In 1990, people graduating with
computer
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and
business
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-related degrees were both 30%.
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, the trend of
computer
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degrees granted continued rising and going up to 45% in 2010.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of
business
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kept on reducing by around 5-10% during the 3 decades. People graduating from medicine and law were pretty much steady every ten years between 1990 and 2010. The percentage of medicine alumni was 25% in both 1990 and 2010,
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rising to 5% in 2000.
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the share of law graduates in 1990, 2000, and 2010 was 15%, 10%, and 15%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, business with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • degrees granted
  • majors
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable trends
  • technological advancements
  • job market demand
  • healthcare policies
  • research breakthroughs
  • economic cycles
  • globalization
  • entrepreneurship trends
  • legislation
  • societal issues
  • international policies
  • academic and professional interests
  • implications
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