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The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010

The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010
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The given graph illustrates the average expenses of patrons on cell
phone
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phones
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, national and international
fixed-line
 and
services
 in America from 2001 to 2010. Generally speaking, it is obvious that the average expenditure represented a high change in cell phone and national
services
while
 the service of international
fixed-line
remain
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 constant.
To begin
 with, the trend of sales in
sevices
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services
 of cell
phone
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phones
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rised
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raised
risen
rise
 dramatically
which
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apply
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increase
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increasing
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 from $200 to $750.
In
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opposite
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, the flow of expenditure in
services
 of national
fixed-line
services
 dropped vitally in the whole period. From 2001 to 2010, it plummeted from $700 to $400.
In contrast
, there is
a
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 insignificant increase flow of the average expenditure of national
fixed-line
services
.
Initially
, it
rised
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rose
raised
rises
 from $250 to $350.
Secondly
, it
keep
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 around $300 from 2003 to 2019.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line, services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rised" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • annual
  • fixed-line services
  • consumer preferences
  • technological advancements
  • economic factors
  • speculate
  • trends
  • notable change
  • shifts in consumer behavior
  • innovation
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