The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line and services in America between 2001 and 2010
The given graph illustrates the average expenses of patrons on cell
phone
, national and international Fix the agreement mistake
phones
fixed-line
and services
in America from 2001 to 2010.
Generally speaking, it is obvious that the average expenditure represented a high change in cell phone and national services
while
the service of international fixed-line
remain
constant.
Change the verb form
remains
To begin
with, the trend of sales in sevices
of cell Correct your spelling
services
phone
Fix the agreement mistake
phones
rised
dramatically Correct your spelling
raised
risen
rise
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
increase
from $200 to $750. Wrong verb form
increasing
In
Change preposition
On
opposite
, the flow of expenditure in Correct article usage
the opposite
services
of national fixed-line
services
dropped vitally in the whole period. From 2001 to 2010, it plummeted from $700 to $400.
In contrast
, there is a
insignificant increase flow of the average expenditure of national Change the article
an
fixed-line
services
. Initially
, it rised
from $250 to $350. Correct your spelling
rose
raised
rises
Secondly
, it keep
around $300 from 2003 to 2019.Change the verb form
keeps
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