The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The line graph illustrates
requests
for data at a tourist office in the UK from January
to June
.
Overall
, in January
in
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person,
person
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personal
information
requests
were the lowest, whereas
, in June
requests
for information
in person
were the highest.
As can clearly be seen, originally the requests
by letter
/email
were a little less than 800, however
, from January
to March the number of requests
gradually decreased and in March, the number of requests
by letter
/email
was 700. From March to May the requests
by letter
/email
declined rapidly and in May, the number of requests
by letter
/email
was roughly 380. From May to June
the requests
remained unchanged. Initially
, requests
for data by telephone were the highest accounting for 900, meanwhile, requests
for information
in person
were the lowest at a little more than 400. From January
to February the figure of requests
by telephone dropped, however
, over time the figure of requests
started to increase and in June
requests
by telephone reached its peak at 1600. From January
to June
requests
in person
rose and in June
it
reached Correct pronoun usage
they
its
peak at 1900. In Correct pronoun usage
their
June
in
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person
requests
were the highest accounting for 1900, while
by
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letter
/email
information
requests
were the lowest accounting for approximately 380.Submitted by tmargaryan2006 on
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