The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts information about how the glass is processed.
Overall
, as we can see from the picture, it consists of five stages, combined in Recycle
Bin, Treatment Plant, Washing and Sterilizing Correct article usage
a Recycle
Machine
, Crushing and Melting Machine
to Moulding Machine
.
First of all, the bottles are taken from recycling bins by trucks to the treatment plant. Thereafter
, the wasted glasses are cleaned from microorganisms in a washing and sterilizing machine
. The following stage includes crushing the jar into smaller pieces and melting those items with a special machine
with a specific temperature. The last
step is to produce liquid mass by a moulding machine
, then
reshape it into a bottle and ready for further
usage.
Moreover
, after those several steps, the glasses that were already recycled were picked up by the delivery vehicle to transfer to Supermarkets. Subsequently
, the cycle would start again after buyers bought glasses from Supermarkets, and then
threw them into the garbage bins.Submitted by anjanadmr on
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