In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. .What are reasons for this? .How people can research this?

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In
this
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day and age, in many countries, numerous
people
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are eager to carry out some
researches
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research
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about
their
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place where they live there like
building
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buildings
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,
household
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households
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and so on. It appears
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some causes like how much they are
pessimist
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or how much they are curious about their place. And
also
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they can find
this
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information
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via the internet, some folk and
neighbors
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, and
elderly
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the elderly
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. On the one hand, a huge number of
buildings
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are constructed in all countries
which
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some
neighborhood’s
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neighbourhood’s
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buildings
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are older
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that
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which
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is a cause of communities’ concerns. First of all,
people
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after living in a house or building for a
while
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,
they
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are curious about the
buildings
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.
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, they
looking
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look
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for some
information
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about
building
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the building
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age
or
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how much it shows resistance against earthquakes or how it
built
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solidly.
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, they will become pessimist and seek
for
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some answers. As
the
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a
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results
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result
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, some decisions are
then
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taken about moving to another place or staying there. On the other, they are enthusiastic about their
neighborhood’s
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history because they want to know what
there
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their
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before were.
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, in our
neighborhood
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there were a lot of bars and clubs
which
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all of them disappeared because of some strict
roles
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rules
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.
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, there is a border variety of methods for finding out some data about
buildings
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or neighborhoods.
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, the internet has changed our
life
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lives
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noticeably that by a simple search on Google you can find every
things
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thing
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.
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It gives you a vivid imagination about your
neighborhood’s
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history, it would not give you
a
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specific data about your building because it almost has general data.
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, folk are more effective in your research by asking some
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questions
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from
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.
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, the best source of
information
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is old
people
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in a
neighborhood
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who
packed
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are packed
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with a lot of
information
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.
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,
neighbors
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who have lived in your building more than others will be useful in
investigation
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an investigation
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. In conclusion,
although
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people
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are
passion
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about the history of their building, it will bring them more concerns. Ignorance is bliss.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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