The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016
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The presented pie charts illustrate the amount of
income
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and expense of a children’s charity
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situated in the USA in 2016.
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, it can be seen that the whole
income
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of the charity was a bit higher than the expenditures.
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, the highest ratio of the
revenue
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related to the donated food,
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the biggest proportion of spending belonged to the program services. In detail, 86.6% of
income
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belonged to the donated food and the next highest portion was the community contributions which provided only 10.4% of the
revenue
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.
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, the program
revenue
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was only 2.2% of the whole receiving resources, three other parts namely, the investment
income
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, the government grants, and the other
income
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combined less than a
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of the whole
revenue
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. In terms of expenditures, there are three parts. Less than 5% of outgoings related to the fundraising and the management and general sections,
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a considerable amount of money which was 95.8% was spent on the program services.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, revenue with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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