The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016
The presented pie charts illustrate the amount of
income
and expense of a children’s charity where is
situated in the USA in 2016.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the whole income
of the charity was a bit higher than the expenditures. Additionally
, the highest ratio of the revenue
related to the donated food, while
the biggest proportion of spending belonged to the program services.
In detail, 86.6% of income
belonged to the donated food and the next highest portion was the community contributions which provided only 10.4% of the revenue
. Whereas
, the program revenue
was only 2.2% of the whole receiving resources, three other parts namely, the investment income
, the government grants, and the other income
combined less than a percent
of the whole Change the spelling
per cent
revenue
.
In terms of expenditures, there are three parts. Less than 5% of outgoings related to the fundraising and the management and general sections, while
a considerable amount of money which was 95.8% was spent on the program services.Submitted by royakarimi435 on
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