The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many overseas tourists
who
visited three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in percentages.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
all areas saw a gradual increase, except the lakes at the end
of the given period.
Regarding the coast, that place was popular among overseas visitors, starting with 40 thousand
at the beginning of the period,the coast experienced a slight decrease by around 10 thousand
before reaching its peak with
approximately 70 Change preposition
at
thousand
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the lake was less popular for tourists in 1987.However
, the figure for the lake rose significantly and overtook the coast between 1997 and 2002 at its peak with over 70 thousand
visitors.Following
this
, the figure saw a slight fall to around 55 thousand
.While
the mountains started with 20 thousand
, they witnessed a fluctuation and climbed to 30 thousand
at the end
of the period.Submitted by ikromovavazbek01 on
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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