The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many overseas tourists
who
visited three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in percentages.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
all areas saw a gradual increase, except the lakes Linking Words
at the end
of the given period.
Regarding the coast, that place was popular among overseas visitors, starting with 40 Linking Words
thousand
at the beginning of the period,the coast experienced a slight decrease by around 10 Use synonyms
thousand
before reaching its peak Use synonyms
with
approximately 70 Change preposition
at
thousand
in 2007.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the lake was less popular for tourists in 1987.Linking Words
However
, the figure for the lake rose significantly and overtook the coast between 1997 and 2002 at its peak with over 70 Linking Words
thousand
visitors.Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, the figure saw a slight fall to around 55 Linking Words
thousand
.Use synonyms
While
the mountains started with 20 Linking Words
thousand
, they witnessed a fluctuation and climbed to 30 Use synonyms
thousand
Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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