You should write at least 150 words. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
The map represents the village called Chorleywood which is located near London with an increasing population since the middle of the 19th century.
Overall
, three routes are established for easy travelling including a main road, motorway
and a railway. Correct article usage
a motorway
Additionally
, for entertainment purposes, people can attend a park and golf course.
To begin
, the first main road goes from the southwest to the northwest where it crosses another main road which begins from the east side. Additionally
, the Chorleywood station is placed on the railway which was built in 1909, stretching from the northeast to the west. The motorway runs from the east side of the golf course and park passing some housing zones.
Furthermore
, apart from accommodation areas, two vegetation fields are located in the southwest corner and from the east of the station. Moreover
, another living district can be observed around the station just in between green fields.Submitted by innakireeva0101 on
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