The bar graph illustrated data about the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for last year. Describe it.

The bar graph illustrated data about the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for last year. Describe it.
Depicted in the bar graph is data about the estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for
last
year. The regions that were observed
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divided into 6 groups, which were South Asia, Arab States, Sub-Saharan Africa, East Asia/Oceania, Latin American/Caribbean, and Developed Countries.
Furthermore
, the genders were illustrated as different colours, the purple one refers to the women,
while
the blue one represents the men.
Overall
, it can be observed that the region that had the highest number of illiteracy was South Asia, with more than half the female population and more than 30% of the male population.
On the other hand
, the lowest went to Developed Countries, contributing a tiny fraction from both genders. Another noteworthy aspect is that the biggest gap between both genders went to
Arab
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States with almost
20
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% difference between the
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females
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and
male
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males
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.
On the other hand
, the smallest gap went to Developed Countries with the male being slightly lower than the woman.
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