Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:  Describe the item you lost.  Explain how you lost it.  Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to concern

with

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about

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suitcase

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that I lost a week ago. I returned from Paris to Moscow by

airplane

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aeroplane

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from

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Sibir Airline Company. Let me

discribe

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describe

suitcase

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, so it was

colored

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coloured

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black and on it were red lines and it had

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a wite

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wite

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white

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zip.

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suitcase

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were some important documents. I would like to tell you that my issue

happend

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happened

happens

happen

due to

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problem

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a problem

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with

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the airplane

an airplane

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airplane

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aeroplane

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during when

plane

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the plane

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landed

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airport

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the airport

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. It is horrible when you

listen

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hear

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that have a danger of

plane

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planes

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and

that is

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why everybody started

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to harry

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harry

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hurry

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up to go out. So I

also

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harred

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hard

to go out from

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the airplane

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airplane

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aeroplane

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and we all our items left in

plane

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the plane

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. And

then

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relized

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realized

realised

that I lost my bag. I consider that we must open clime for it and I wish to refund

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the

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price of my

suitcase

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. It

were

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jast

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just

250 $ when I bought it. I am looking forward to

get

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getting

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your

desision

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decision

about

this

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issue . Yours faithfully Zohrab

Submitted by zohrab-gevorgyan on Mon Feb 19 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. The second paragraph could be split to distinctly describe the lost item and then explain how it was lost in separate paragraphs.

logical structure

The letter structure could be improved by clearly separating information into paragraphs: introduction, description of the lost item, explanation of how it was lost, and what you expect from the insurance company.

suitable writing tone

Use a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid using slang expressions (e.g., 'harry up') and contractions to maintain formality, which is expected in a letter to a business or authority.

complete response

Re-check the letter for spelling and grammar mistakes, which can hinder the clarity of your message. Pay particular attention to the correct spelling of words ('discribe' should be 'describe', 'clime' should be 'claim', etc.).

greeting and closing

Conclude your letter with a formal closing statement followed by your name to maintain the formal tone.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:  Describe the item you lost.  Explain how you lost it.  Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Nowadays, a growing number of peole with health problems are trying alternative nedicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations,others ,however think that tv and internet is the best way to learn.Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad.Despite knowing that millions of people engage in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?