The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The illustration presents an overview of key stages involved in the manufacturing of ceramic
pots
from two main steps namely collecting as well as
processing.
The whole process of ceramic pots
started when raw materials are
exploited from the ground, followed by being delivered to a factory. Wrong verb form
were
Following
this
, they enter a crushing machine where those materials are crushed to be made into small pieces which then
are mixed with the supplement of water. After these have been thoroughly blended together, the mixture goes through moulds where they are dried for four to six hours. Once the assembled clay pots
were
moved from shapes, it is Wrong verb form
are
then
followed by being passed in a specialised container called heating
oven Correct article usage
a heating
in
1000 degrees Change preposition
at
celsius
. Capitalize word
Celsius
Subsequently
, a penultimate phase which is colouring is carried out. It then
leads to the final step of the process where the coloured pots
are fed back to the oven with a view to firing and become
finished products.Wrong verb form
becoming
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