The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts visitor numbers of Ashdown Museum
while
the pie charts illustrate the survey given to Linking Words
visitors
asking about the level of satisfaction during their visit. The statistics are taken from years before and after the refurbishment of the museum. It was shown that in the year following, more people were going to the museum and they were generally more satisfied during their visit.
In the case of the figures in the table, the number of Use synonyms
visitors
was increasing from 74.000 to 92.000. There was a rise to 18.000 Use synonyms
visitors
after the renovations.
Turning to the pie charts, it can be seen that the percentage of Use synonyms
visitors
who feel very satisfied and satisfied rose considerably from 45% before the refurbishments to 75% after. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the proportion of those who are dissatisfied and very dissatisfied dropped more than half, from 50% before the changes to 20% after. The number of people who gave no response to the survey remained unchanged still 5% in both years.Linking Words
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