The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 . Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007 . Summarize the information and make comparison. Write at least 150 words.
The presented bar chart illustrates destinations chosen by UK citizens over a four-year period.
Overall
, it can be seen that Australia was selected by
British
people more than four other countries in all years.
Additionally
, Spain and New Zealand experienced fall trends over the given time,
While
the figure for the USA had some fluctuation during the period. In detail, in the first two years, around 40000
British
selected Australia,
whereas
this
number rose dramatically to more
50
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thousand in 2006, and
then
declined to almost 42000 people.
Moreover
, Spain was selected by around 33 thousand UK citizens;
however
, in 2007
this
destination was chosen by only 28000 people. Despite the fact that the
British
emigration to New Zealand witnessed a gradual decrease over the given time, the USA and France experienced
mildly
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fluctuation. In the beginning, Only 22 thousand
British
opted for France,
while
compared to 2004 over the following 3 years, a
decline
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declining
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trend can be observed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words british with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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