The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.

The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
The diagrams illustrate conference sites which were held in 2009 and 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the plans is that a
room
calledrefreshment was built in 2010 and some rooms were redeveloped . As can be seen in 2009,
while
entering via the main entrance on the right side there was a registration. In front of the main enterance there was a concert
room
which backed onto the meeting
room
. About meeting
room
, it accommodated the stage and some
seats
. Aditionally, in the display
area
there were
seats
there.
Also
, in the south west of the floor were an spacious balcony and there was an exhibition
area
just on the east of which.
Also
evident is, with regard to 2010, the number of
seats
reduced.
Besides
that, the exhibition
area
turned into a concert hall which housed a stage and plenty of
seats
. Another important fact is that theexhibition
area
moved to the southwesten side of the floor and extended. The registration
area
changed into the refreshment
room
.
Additionally
, balcony improved by constructing lougue
area
.
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