The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.

The maps below compare 2 floor plans of one trade conference held in 2009 and 2010.
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The diagrams illustrate conference sites which were held in 2009 and 2010.
Overall
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, what stands out from the plans is that a
room
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calledrefreshment was built in 2010 and some rooms were redeveloped . As can be seen in 2009,
while
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entering via the main entrance on the right side there was a registration. In front of the main enterance there was a concert
room
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which backed onto the meeting
room
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. About meeting
room
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, it accommodated the stage and some
seats
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. Aditionally, in the display
area
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there were
seats
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there.
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, in the south west of the floor were an spacious balcony and there was an exhibition
area
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just on the east of which.
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evident is, with regard to 2010, the number of
seats
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reduced.
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that, the exhibition
area
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turned into a concert hall which housed a stage and plenty of
seats
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. Another important fact is that theexhibition
area
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moved to the southwesten side of the floor and extended. The registration
area
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changed into the refreshment
room
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.
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, balcony improved by constructing lougue
area
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, seats, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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