The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides figures concerning seven different kinds of occupation and their relation with active workers in Australia
last
year.
Overall
, it is possible to see that clerical and professional jobs are mainly occupied by men, even though the difference between female workers and male workers is not so huge, whereas
the other five job types are leaded
by women.
Concerning the role played by women Correct your spelling
led
on
Change preposition
in
work
market, it is interesting to note that tradespeople-related jobs have nine times more Correct article usage
the work
female
working on Fix the agreement mistake
females
it
, with figures Correct pronoun usage
them
by
900,000. Change preposition
of
In addition
, Managers, Production and Labourers,
are Remove the comma
apply
also
fields where female work-force
is prevalent. Correct your spelling
workforce
Mens
represented one-third Correct your spelling
Men
from
600,000, one-fifth Change preposition
of
from
almost 500,500, and almost Change preposition
of
three-fourth
Correct your spelling
three-fourths
from
400,000, respectively.
Clerical and professional jobs, Change preposition
of
on the other hand
, are mainly occupied by males. However
, the difference between women
occupation Change noun form
women's
rate
working Fix the agreement mistake
rates
on
the same sector is slightly fewer, being less than 100,000.Change preposition
in
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