The chart below gives information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates a comparison of the
cost
of airline
tickets
from
Sydney
to
Melbourne
and vice versa in Australia in 2013, broken down into two different weeks. Units are measured in dollars.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the price of
tickets
fluctuated widely in both the first
week
and the second
week
.
Moreover
, it is
also
interesting to note that the
cost
of airline
tickets
on Friday, Saturday and Sunday is higher than that on other
days
. From
Sydney
to
Melbourne
, passengers had to pay the most expensive ticket at $80 on Monday in the first
week
,
while
they just had to spend nearly half of
this
cost
on the same day in the second
week
. In comparison with
this
, the
cost
of airline
tickets
on the following
days
were
Change the verb form
was
show examples
far cheaper at about $35 in both weeks as opposed to the price of the rest
days
which was more than $49. From
Melbourne
to
Sydney
, the trend of the
cost
was almost similar to the flight from
Sydney
to
Melbourne
with the prices being cheaper on Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday at approximately $33 compared to the rest of the
days
which were almost double at least $50.
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