You are moving to a new city with your family. Write a letter to a real estate agent to enquire about accommodations. Include in your letter Why you are moving Where you want to live The type of accommodation required
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you
for
my interest Change preposition
of
about
accommodations. I am going Change preposition
in
to
holiday next week. I would like to say that I am planning to come with my family to Change preposition
on
USA
, and I wish to stay Correct article usage
the USA
at
a new city Change preposition
in
nearby
of sea .
I have Correct your spelling
near
listen
about that new city recently . I consider that It is the Verb problem
heard
most
place that we could spend our time with my wife and my children during our trip. There are a lot of interesting places for Fix the agreement mistake
apply
turists
Correct your spelling
tourists
specilay
I am interested in Correct your spelling
specially
fishing
area.
It is important that we stay single home but it must Add an article
the fishing
has
3 bedrooms, twoChange the verb form
have
bathroom
,Fix the agreement mistake
bathrooms
a
Correct word choice
and a
larg
kitchen with Correct your spelling
large
equipments
. The most important that the house has Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
nice
yard where will be Add an article
a nice
colorfull
flowers, trees and Correct your spelling
colourful
Correct article usage
a corner
corner
for children. If you have that kind of home please book it for usFix the agreement mistake
corners
8
Change preposition
for 8
night
since 8th June.
Yours faithfully
ZohrabFix the agreement mistake
nights
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Task Response
Ensure that the purpose of your letter is clearly stated at the beginning. Mentioning that you are moving and seeking accommodation should be explicit.
Task Response
Detail the reasoning behind your move more clearly. Providing context improves task response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Follow a logical sequence in your paragraphs. Start with the reason for your move, followed by your specific requirements for accommodation, and conclude with the request for booking.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and closings for formal letters. Instead of 'Dear Sir/Madam', 'Dear [Title and name]' if known, or 'To whom it may concern' could be used. Sign off with 'Yours sincerely' if the name is known, or 'Yours faithfully' (as correctly used) if not.
Coherence and Cohesion
Divide your content into paragraphs based on topics: introduction and reason for writing, detailed requirements, and closing with a specific request or question.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite