Some people think that ti is impossible for females to be successful working women and good mothers at the same time. They also suggest that government should give salary to mothers who stay at home to take care of their children. Do you agree or disagree with the statement

Women

are the nurturers who take

care

of the future generation.

Hence

,the

well being

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of a

mother

or grandmother is of profound importance to a developing nation, so it's the responsibility of the government to provide a salary to mothers who stay at home." Be

women

, stay

women

, and become

women

" states that a woman's traditional role in ancient civilization was that of a caregiver, and

society

still believes

women

are the best at the role of a

mother

.

However

,in the

last

few decades, there has been a great transformation in typical female roles

due to

globalisation and industrialization.

Further

, there has always been a debate about whether a good

mother

or homemaker could be a good professional. In my opinion,

women

are good at multitasking, they are capable enough to be

self sufficient

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as well as

great mothers. Modernization has impacted our

society

in various ways, but it is an undeniable fact,

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our

society

, females are still considered to stay at home and take

care

of the children. There are constraints imposed on females by the family and social circles.

Subsequently

, they end up putting their whole effort into grooming the family

such

as taking

care

of the elders, completing chores, and maintaining harmony in the family. Sadly, her hard work in nurturing her family often goes unnoticed.

For example

, my

mother

is a great housewife, her day starts at 4 a.m.,

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from

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taking

care

of my grandmother to looking after my niece and nephew, she does

this

all

single handedly

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. She never gets appreciated for her herculean task;

hence

, it

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be a turning point if the government could pay a salary for all the homemakers and take

care

of their

well being

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.

In contrast

,globalization has impacted the patterns of

society

. Sixty to seventy years ago, we've got to see joint family patterns, contrastingly, in today's world, we notice a lot of nuclear family systems evolving in urban and suburban areas.

As a result

, there is a lot of pressure being built up in the nuclear family regarding finances, childcare, etc., which, in turn,deviates the role of

women

from being traditional

homemaker

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to multitasking both professionally and personally as a

mother

, wife , daughter-in-law, etc.

For instance

,

women

like Indira Nooyi and Sudha Murthy set examples of how to balance both their professional and personal lives. In conclusion, in my opinion , it is necessary to pay mothers because that support will aid the healthy development of our future generations