The diagram shows the process of making instant coffee. Write a report of at least 150 words showing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the progress of instant
coffee
from the farmland to the shops.overall
.it is clear to see that there are many steps involved,from harvesting coffee
beans
to putting them into the
jars.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with,coffee
beans
must first be picked in the fields.These beans
are then
dried,roasted and cooled before being put in a grinding machine,which turns the beans
into coffee
granules. After that
the Add a comma
that,
coffee
beans
would become coffee
powder.In the next stage of the process. The coffee
powder is mixed with hot water before straining the mixture then
the filter liquid is frozen.
In the subsequent stage
the frozen mixture is ground once more, and Add a comma
stage,
then
the granules are dried in the vacuum, which is used in order to completely remove the moisture. Finally
, the dried instant coffee
powder is packaged into containers and distributed to stores for sale.Submitted by stellachen28577 on
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