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the charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US

the charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US
#show #information #honey-bee #colonies #honey #production
The information about
honey
 bee
colonies
 and
production
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the production
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 of
honey
 in the US is illustrated by
a
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given bar graphs
in
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for
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 the
perion
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period
person
 of forty years. The data has been calibrated in numbers
To conclude
, it can be vividly manifested that the figures of
colonies
 experienced
downward
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a downward
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 trend,
while
 the production of
honey
 noticed
with
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fluctuations
figures
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in figures
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. Upon initial examination of the chart, a slight disparity was noticed in the number of
honey
bees
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bee
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colonies
 between 1970 and 1980 with 4
millions
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million
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 and 4.2
millions
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million
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, respectively.
Further
 analysis reveals that
,
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 the ratio of
colonies
 of bees declined from 4.2
millions
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million
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 to 3.5
millions
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million
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 during
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the
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next 10 years,
whereas
 a
two fold
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 reduction was apparent in the number of
colonies
 which was 3.5
millions
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million
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 in 1990 and 1.7
millions
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million
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 in 2010, correspondingly. Moving to the next information, a significant increment could be seen in the quantity of
honey
 from 130,000 to 110,000 in 1970 and 1980. Henceforward, there was a gradual incline of 10000 in
theproduction
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the production
 oh
honey
 in 1990. Probing ahead, a considerable dwindle was observed from 2000 to 2010 in the amount of
honey
, the former
one
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was 100,000 and the latter was 70,000.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, colonies, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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