the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site summerise the infotmation by selecting and reporsting the main features and make comparision when relevant

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The two maps illustrate

Norbition

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's industrial area and master plan for future development. The idea is to transform the manufacturing area into be residential area.

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, there will be a lot of changes. Now, the city of

Norbition

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is full of factories. If we look closer to the first map, there are eight works building.

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, in the future, all the plants will be destroyed and many houses will be built in that region. The second map shows the town's enlargement scheme. There will be seven blocks of residence where one of which will be assembled on the North side of the river. Not only houses, but a playground and a

schools

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will be constructed on the East side of the district.

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, other facilities which are a shopping building and a medical centre will be set up near the centre of

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Norbition

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Nutrition

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, the road

also

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will be expanded around the city. In sum, there will be a dramatic transformation in the industrial region in the town of

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Norbition

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Nutrition

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
current layout
future development
infrastructure
warehouses
factories
road network
residential area
green spaces
land usage
zoning
mixed-use
town planning
redevelopment
modernization
commercial facilities
traffic flow
environmental impact
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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site summerise the infotmation by selecting and reporsting the main features and make comparision when relevant

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Some people think that detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV programs has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree?

Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?