the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site summerise the infotmation by selecting and reporsting the main features and make comparision when relevant

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site

summerise the infotmation by selecting and reporsting the main features and make comparision when relevant
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The two maps illustrate
Norbition
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's industrial area and master plan for future development. The idea is to transform the manufacturing area into be residential area.
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, there will be a lot of changes. Now, the city of
Norbition
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is full of factories. If we look closer to the first map, there are eight works building.
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, in the future, all the plants will be destroyed and many houses will be built in that region. The second map shows the town's enlargement scheme. There will be seven blocks of residence where one of which will be assembled on the North side of the river. Not only houses, but a playground and a
schools
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will be constructed on the East side of the district.
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, other facilities which are a shopping building and a medical centre will be set up near the centre of
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Norbition
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Nutrition
.
In addition
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, the road
also
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will be expanded around the city. In sum, there will be a dramatic transformation in the industrial region in the town of
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Norbition
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Nutrition
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words norbition with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • current layout
  • future development
  • infrastructure
  • warehouses
  • factories
  • road network
  • residential area
  • green spaces
  • land usage
  • zoning
  • mixed-use
  • town planning
  • redevelopment
  • modernization
  • commercial facilities
  • traffic flow
  • environmental impact
  • community amenities
  • sustainable development
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