The diagram presents how pulp and paper are made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram depicts the process of producing pulp and
paper
.
Overall
, it is clear that
eleven steps during the whole procedure, from the start period of logging trees to the outcome is paper
.
As presented, in the beginning, workers cut down trees and chip them, until customers purchase them, they are sent to the factories, with processing, They are pressed through digesters, then
shaped in washers and pulp screens. After that, they are stored in the industries before consuming. In the middle course of Correct word choice
and then
producing
, buyers can customize the shape, Replace the word
production
which
depending on their usage. If they want boxes, Correct pronoun usage
apply
labors
manufacture the products, which Replace the word
labourers
made
up Add a missing verb
are made
with
rough Change preposition
of
paper
, during a series of processing
, like forming, drying, reeling and cutting. Fix the agreement mistake
processes
On the other hand
, if they prefer rolls, worker
clean Fix the agreement mistake
workers
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
at
Change preposition
apply
first,
then
send them into dryers and press them into paper
, in the final stage, paper
rolls are ready for selling.Submitted by Joanna
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