The diagram presents how pulp and paper are made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram presents how pulp and paper are made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram depicts the process of producing pulp and
paper
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
eleven steps during the whole procedure, from the start period of logging trees to the outcome is
paper
. As presented, in the beginning, workers cut down trees and chip them, until customers purchase them, they are sent to the factories, with processing, They are pressed through digesters,
then
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and then
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shaped in washers and pulp screens. After that, they are stored in the industries before consuming. In the middle course of
producing
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production
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, buyers can customize the shape,
which
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apply
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depending on their usage. If they want boxes,
labors
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labourers
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manufacture the products, which
made
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are made
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up
with
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of
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rough
paper
, during a series of
processing
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processes
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, like forming, drying, reeling and cutting.
On the other hand
, if they prefer rolls,
worker
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workers
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clean
it
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them
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at
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apply
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first,
then
send them into dryers and press them into
paper
, in the final stage,
paper
rolls are ready for selling.
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