The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Degrees Granted at the National University.
The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010. There are three
pie
charts, 4 that are divided into 4 parts: computer
science
, medicine
, law
and business
.
The first pie
chart
was created in 1990. As you can see the biggest slices compose 30 percent
and it is computer
science
and business
. After there is a medicine
with 25 percent
, and for the end
the Add a comma
end,
law
takes 15 percent
of the first pie
chart
.
In 2000 the percentage of computer
science
increased to 40 percent
.
But the business
pie
chart
fell by 20 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Nevertheless
5 Add a comma
Nevertheless,
percent
were added for the medicine
, and it became 30 percent
. The law
pie
chart
still occupies last
place with 10 percent
.
For the Change the spelling
per cent
last
pie
chart
in 2010 computer
science
again increased till
45 Change preposition
to
percent
. The percentage of medicine
's pie
chart
fell down to 5 percent
and the final percentage is 25%. And the Change the spelling
per cent
pie
charts of
Change preposition
for
business
and law
, are 15 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, computer, science, medicine, law, business, chart, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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