The chart bellow shows the percentage of car trips by purpose and genders in 2015.

The chart bellow shows the percentage of car trips by purpose and genders in 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart bellow shows the percentage of car trips by purpose and genders in 2015.
The given bar chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of car trips by purpose(courses, visiting town, bank, running errands, visiting friends, recreation, work and shopping) and genders of drivers in 2015. Generally speaking,
it is clear that
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the percentage of work is significantly high whether women or men
this
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year.
Firstly
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, the majority of drivers aimed to use their car for working especially for males. We can see that over 50% and almost 40% of men and lady utilise their motor vehicle to have a job.
Secondly
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, the next largest proportion of goals for the two genders was different that were shopping and recreation for ladies and men respectively. The percentage of consumption and entertainment is between 10% and 20%.
Next,
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it was obvious the percentages of girls in the purpose
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course, bank, running errands and visiting friends is greater than boys
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the proportion of remaining objects of boys is vital than women.
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, the ratio of
bank
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banks
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was notable to show that women were more than
gentleman
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triplely.

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