The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The line graph below shows information about how the
birth
and death
rates changed in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.
Overall
, although
the volume of the birth
rate
kept increasing from the past to the present, it will decrease in the future. However
, the death
rate
experienced an upward trend during the given years.
To be specific, the birth
rate
started at approximately 20000s, being twice as many as the death
rate
in 1901. Following that, it climbed dramatically, and then
it reached a peak at around 65000s in 1961. While
there was a fluctuation between 1961 to 2011, the number of the birth
rate
was still higher than the death
rate
.
On the other hand
, the death
rate
rose slowly initially
from about 8000s to 48000s from 1901 to 2021, and it is expected to grow significantly to almost 60000s in the next 80 years, surpassing the birth
rate
in the future.Submitted by Chloe on
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