Chart illustrates the proportion of the UK population to eat fruit and vegetables five times per day from 2001 to 2008.
The presented bar chart shows the
amount
of British people who Change the quantifier
number
eat
fruit and Wrong verb form
ate
vegetables
5 times daily between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of women eaten
fruit and Wrong verb form
eating
vegetables
was the highest in all mentioned years
. Additionally
, all three different groups experienced a rise until 2006, and then
a small fall can be seen to the end of the period.
In detail, in the first three years
, the proportion of having fruit and vegetables
for children and men remained steadily at 12% and 17% respectively, while
in these years
an increased
in the usage of women can be observed between almost 20% and 27% on a daily basis. Change the form of the verb
increase
Furthermore
, In 2004, the percentage of women and children was approximately one to two, whereas
the men group consisted of 20 per cent of total
population.
In the following 2 Add an article
the total
years
, the peak of over one-thirds was reached by females, while
males and youngesters
hit the peak in 2007 at around 27% and a quarter. Correct your spelling
youngsters
Moreover
, at the end
of the period, the ratio of eating vegetables
and fruits per day for all the
UK citizens declined slightly by almost 2
% for each.Correct article usage
apply
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