The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.
The bar and linear charts
shows
the Change the verb form
show
reason
of
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for
travel
and main
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the main
issues
for the travelling public in the US in 2009.Five reason
and six Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
issues
are represented, the reasons are visit, social, shopping, personal and for work, while
the issues
are price
of Add an article
the price
travel
, safety concerns, aggressive drivers, highway congestion, access to public transport and space for pedestrains
.
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pedestrians
First
we Add a comma
First,
concerned
about the Add a missing verb
are concerned
reason
of
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for
travel
. Obviously, the majority of reason
is for work, almost take up half Add an article
the reason
percent
of all, at 49%. Change the spelling
per cent
While
visit somebody and social are the lowest of the chart, the social reason
take up 10% and visit somebody only at 6%. The reason
of
shopping and personal are quite close, Change preposition
apply
they
are 16% and 19%.
The six Add a missing verb
is they
issues
for the travelling public have the
totally different distribution. Price of Correct article usage
a
travel
play
a major role in all, almost 3/1, at 36%. Meanwhile, safety concerns, aggressive drivers and highway congestion Change the verb form
plays
almost
equal, Add a missing verb
are almost
at14
%,17% and 19%.Correct your spelling
at 14
Further more
, the lowest Correct your spelling
Furthermore
issues
are access to public transport and space for pedestrains
, only at 8% and 6%.
In summary, there are Correct your spelling
pedestrians
huge
amount of reasons and Add an article
a huge
issues
,maybe lots of issues
of
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with
price
of Add an article
the price
travel
were happened
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happened
have happened
in
the way to and from work.Change preposition
on
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