The table below gives infromation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives infromation on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the rates of customer earnings in various categories in Ireland, Italy,
Spain
, and Sweden and the
last
one is
Turkey
in 2002. It is obvious that
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the group of
leisure
/education had the lowest rate.
According to
the table, as can be seen,
Turkey
had dedicated their earns to food and
leisure
while
Italy spent the most on clothes.
In addition
,
Spain
became a nation which had less interest in
leisure
/education.
Also
, in the first division (food, drinks, tobacco),
Turkey
stood in first place as the nation which spent costs 32. 14%.
Moreover
, Italy,
Spain
and Sweden stayed in the middle of the range (16. 36, 18. 80, 15. 77 respectively).
Furthermore
, Italy stood in
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first place in clothing/footwear
whereas
Sweden had the lowest rate in that category.
It is clear that
, in the third and
last
section,
Spain
stood in the
last
place.
Also
,
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the
last
section means
leisure
/education in all five countries except
Turkey
which had high interest in that category the remaining lands had the same rate.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words spain, turkey, leisure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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