Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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society

believes that mother and father should educate their

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;

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to be

a

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good

individual

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individuals

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in the community

while

others consider that educational establishments should be the

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responsible for

this

.In my conviction,

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guardian

as the first teachers and nearest relatives to a

child

,they carve the basic

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structure

of their minors to be good or bad in the

future

,

while

educational institutes are the places to

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strengthen

the

child

with

knowlege

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knowledge

and skills to develop

future

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way of living they are not

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succeed

in changing the family influences .

Hence

, I believe, that parents should teach their

child

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children

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to become

a bettermen

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better

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to

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the

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society

.

To begin

with, colleges can build a

child

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nessesary

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necessary

knowledge and skills to get a better job in the

future

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of educational institutes which market themself with the quote that they will

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create

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the

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successful

future

for your

child

, and yes , they will give the necessary knowledge and

practise

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to do it .

However

,it is difficult for them to change the attitudes that

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the child

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child

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children

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inherited

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from

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family background.

For instance

, the Royal

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Colombo, Sri Lanka is recognised as the best school for

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lankan students,

although

they have got that recognition

unfortunely

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unfortunately

some students from

near by

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nearby

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slum

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attending that school ended up still as robbers and

smugllers

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smugglers

due to

their

curruped

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corrupted

corrupt

family background.

Therefore

, Alma mater cannot change the family

infulence

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influence

to create a

scocially

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socially

accepted end product to the community.

On the contrary

,

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a gardian

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gardian

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guardian

can influence and guide the children to be a

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socially

accepted person from

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early childhood. They are the role models of a young one at

early

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an early

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age. These

juvenile

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try to follow their

parets wheather

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parents whether

they act in bad or good.The best example

for

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of

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this

will be

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the

buddist

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Buddhist

story related to 2 parrots ,

according to

it ,the parrot who

was grow

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up

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with bad people

ened

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end

ended

up speaking bad and the one who

grow

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with

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good people

spoked

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good words ,

therefore

as parents

are

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the closest relative to a

child

they are more responsible in creating the final product of good or a bad individual to the

society

. In conclusion,

although

colleges can build a

child

with subject knowledge and

practicle

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practical

practice

skills they cannot

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change

the

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inbuild

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inherent

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by

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in

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a

chid

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child

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that can be only controlled by the

bithgivers

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birth givers

.

Therefore

,

this

writer is in strong notation that parents should teach children how to be good members of

society

.